So I sit down and read a page of my book and then make a bunch of changes in pen. Then I put them into the computer and print them out. The next day I read the page again and put it all back to the way it was. Then I think about it at night and I realize I shouldn't have put it all back. So I undo the changes. And on and on.

I lack the distance to know. I can't read this book anymore. It will go to someone who can tell me objectively whether it's in good shape the way it is, or if it needs more work.

Soon.