Mickey, a reader, writes: "I just read the blog update. Wow! I can’t believe that you are writing porn! But there it is by your own admission triple x rated porn. “Once I've written through all the places that have "xxx" in them and "fill in here," and expanded and shaded in the description and characters and cut and added, there are still a few boring scenes that are there now to explain what's going on that eventually will just be dead weight.”
He gave me some porno sentences to add here, but I know it's a sunny day out and no one wants to be inside reading such trash.